Monday, December 8, 2014

Ten Course Themes

As you're developing your portfolio cover letter, you might consider reflecting on one or more of the following themes of the class:


  1. Writing badly.  We've used this phrase to stand in for the idea that sometimes when we follow our words in writing rather than trying to muscle them into obedience, writing can be a mode of discovery and learning.  Frequently, this requires lower our standards enough to get some writing done.
  2. Research as conversation.  Knowledge in a field is the product of an on-going conversation among people with authority to speak.  As novices and outsiders, we are obligated to first listen in to what has been said but ultimately to add in some small way to this on-going conversation.  We should extend this conversation metaphor to our reading as well, listening in and talking with sources when we encounter them.  Writing "in the middle" of research can help with this
  3. Academic inquiry.  In much school writing, we're taught to figure out what we think before we see what we say.  This leads to the rush to a thesis, nailing things down as quickly as possible.  But this rush to judgment is the antithesis of academic inquiry, whose purpose is discovery.  In academic inquiry we begin with questions, not answers, and in the process try to figure out what we think.
  4. Essaying.  A verb that describes the process of writing to find out.   
  5. Essay.  A genre that encourages essaying.  Meanings emerge later in an essay rather than in a billboard thesis in the introductory paragraph.  We write essays to find out. We write papers to prove.
  6. Narrator.  Strong writers always narrate, even in formal writing.  Readers look for the guiding hand to lead them through the material, and if they sense it's missing, they'll stop reading.
  7. Narrative.  The four elements of narrative--time, place, character, and causality--are often used in researched writing to keep readers interested.  We anchor larger questions and ideas to particular people, places, and times, and in this way make concepts and claims less abstract and remote.  
  8. Narrative thinking.  Logical thinking is a powerful way to work with larger ideas and concepts by stripping away concern about context. We write about how a problem affects "society." Narrative thinking foregrounds context.  This is how the problem affects this person or this particular community.  
  9. Genre.  Genre is not an inert container into which we pour information but a dynamic one.  It changes the information and the information alters the form.  Genre is something we see through, that influences what we see and how we see it.
  10. Rhetoric.  Persuasive writing depends on the appropriate balance of ethos, pathos, and logos, and this balance is determined by analyzing one's audience and the writer's purpose.  

The  cover letters are a key part of the portfolio. I encourage you to spend time writing and thinking about your takeaways from the course, including how you've come to understand one or more of these themes.

Confessions of a "Librarian"

So in case you all didn't already know the library is open 24 hours a day this week and next week.  And as you can imagine and I'm sure you already knew a little bit first hand, college students are kind of a little bit crazy.  And we all know they're even crazier late at night when they're stressing about their finals and group projects and portfolios.
Now, I work in the library.  But I don't work there when all the normal kids are there because I work closing shifts.  I work until midnight during a regular week.  It gets a little weird.  And it's already gotten weirder.  Last night there was this guy checking out a laptop from the front desk, and I'm not totally sure why but he had a half dozen container of hard boiled eggs.  Am I missing something here?  Are those a really good study food or something? There was also a girl checking out some books who was really persistent in telling all of us working there that her uncle was crazy for having a service animal.  When we asked her why he was so crazy she launched into a huge explanation for why snakes can't really be service animals.  Until last night I was not even aware that there needed to be an argument against snakes being used as service animals.
Needless to say there are some strange happenings at the library, and as the hours get later and later I'll bet you that people will start being weirder and weirder.  So this week as I'm frantically trying to revise my papers behind the circulation desk I will try to keep on eye on all of these crazy kids, and hopefully I'll come away with some good stories to tell.  And also a decent portfolio for this class.  That's probably a little more important than a handful of weird stories.

Ashley Bates
DISCLAIMER: I wrote this blog post over a week ago but never typed it up, that is why my blog posts that seem to be written right after another are actually about my research paper over time.

I have found my brain running loose with this new kind of writing. In high school, we used specific outlines to get only specific wheels turning while stopping others. This class is like greasing up those wheels with some WD-40 and letting them run and run and run and run and spew out information and the new job is trying to get it all down on paper in a way that makes sense.

But this seems to be my biggest struggle. I have thrown out and rewritten my research paper so many times it's ridiculous. Why am I doing this? Because I keep on letting the wheels spin and the paper begins to go out of control. Having never written a research paper, I don't even have a funnel for those to go into.

This, I believe, is the function of those structures we all write again and again in high school. These annoying formulas are the funnels we use so that when we get to this class, we can let the wheels spin but also funnel out what we need.

I have decided to literally write out an outline, make my essay structured but also randomly let the wheels spin a little. I need to call back my internal critic that I let go of at the beginning of the year and find a little structure for these crazy wheels in my head.

Sunday, December 7, 2014

Reflection for Portfolio

As I wrote my cover letter for my portfolio, it actually made me stop and think about the semester. In five days we will all officially be done with this class, and for some of us, done with English classes for the rest of our lives. And looking back on my past semester, I am very glad that I was put into this section of English 112. English has never been my favorite subject and I have always liked/been better at math and science. And if I am not good at something, there is a very good chance that I will not like it either. But as I wrote the cover letter and it asked what we would take away from this class and what we had learned this semester, I had to think before I was able to put it simply. I had learned many things throughout this class- making every writing piece personal, making a research essay interesting, how to transform a twelve page essay into a few bullet points, but after I looked at all the things that I had learned I realized that it all came back to me spending more time on each piece of writing. I do not like revising things. I would rather write it and be done with it. But taking the extra time while I am writing the initial piece and especially while I am revising, truly makes a piece that much better. Another big thing that I pulled out from writing the cover letter was that looking at an essay from the audience's point of view really helped my writing. Asking myself, would I take the time to read this? And if the question was no, then I knew that there was still work to be done on my essay. Although I feel that I went through these processes as the seamster went on, I did not consciously realize them until I wrote my cover letter.

This is it

I'm excited to get the portfolio done, but I'm not looking forward to the process of revising. I hope when I finish everything I am proud of it all, however, I worry that I'm never going to be satisfied with what I "finish". I know what I want to put in the portfolio, I think, but I don't know if I'll be happy with what I end up writing.

I'm sure everyone else knows this feeling. In fact there's really only one project that I'm really proud of right now and that's the re-purposing project. I know exactly how I want to change that and what I need to do to make it what I want. The other essays I know they need to change drastically but I don't know if I'll ever be happy with them. When I write I'm either extremely pleased with a project or I don't care about it very much and I hate revising essays. This will be interesting but it's important to remember that this is it, it's the end, it's our last chance to make these papers what we want.

Revising on my Closet Door

My closet door has found a new purpose in my academic life.

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Thursday, December 4, 2014

Video vs. Essay

            When I showed my video in class on Monday it felt weird. It was like writing a really bad essay and having someone read over it as a final draft, but ten times worse. I felt like I was much more exposed making a video than I ever have been writing an essay. It wasn’t just easy to change words on a page. I felt like the video did a much better job of catching my voice than an essay, and I guess that was the whole point of this project. I converted my essay to a different mode and I think it actually improved what AI was trying to say. The video format really let me choose how I wanted people to feel. Yes, you can do this with words too, but with a video you also have music, narration and the actual cinematography itself. It really allows one to create a mood on multiple dimensions. However, because this was a personal essay, all of those dimensions became personal too. It wasn’t just about how the audience felt, but also about it made me feel. What was the internal process I had to go through while writing this essay? I found myself asking this over and over again. When I was finished the reason it made me uncomfortable was because I think it somewhat captured that emotion. It made me feel like that with all of those dimensions I was putting myself out there more than before. It wasn't just because I thought I could improve on the video, and I certainly can. When I revise it I will definitely add clearer audio, maybe cut down the length just a little bit but I will definitely leave the same feel. The fact that it made me uncomfortable meant it worked, so I should keep the tone. However, this means I can’t tear every part down and remake it as I would like too. That would certainly get rid of the tone, and that “tone” is what I want to shine through when I turn it in, in my portfolio.