Maybe I am just over thinking this, but this script is much harder to write than I originally thought it would be.
I suppose that is because I am trying to find a good balance between statistics and feminist attitude. I am not one of those "man-hating" feminists, and I don't want my project to portray that either. However, as I read what I have written, I feel that all people would take away is the bitter sarcasm in it. I don't want people to just write this off as some 'speech' by just another feminist. I would like people to simply think about how religion might be influencing this issue.
I feel like this is a really big deal that no one seems to know or even consider. It absolutely blows my mind that the general population has not been introduced to this idea. Who would have thought that the gender we consider God to be could be having a profound affect on our thoughts towards feminism and gender equality? And to me, it makes perfect sense, but maybe I'm the only one who sees this connection as significant.
I want to portray just how significant this idea is while not overloading on the attitude.
And besides all of this, the Christmas music on the radio is rather distracting.
I agree about the Christmas music, and about wanting to make sure your thesis doesn't get confused I think the words are important but how they are presented is almost twice as important when you're reading or presenting something you've written. I know this is late for your draft but if you want to make sure it's not misconstrued be conscious of your tone of voice and your body language. I'm sure your message will come through though!
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